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____I hope my letter finds you in the best of health. I received your kind letter yesterday; you asked me about my studies and preparations for the upcoming exam in your letter. The date for our annual exam has been announced; it's the 3rd of March and my progress in studies is quite satisfactory.
____Almost all of our courses have been completed. Now we have started our revision classes in school. I personally joined an acadmy for English Language and Linguistics a month ago. I go to the academy for attending my class for an hour after my school; which is adding much to my commond on the subject of English. I also go to my mathematics teacher's home to practice my mathematics with her in the evening to make up for my weakness in mathematics, while I study all other subjects for three to four hours at home daily. I have attempted the previous examination papers, as you had advised me, to see that the papers attempted well I time. I have done a lot of practice with watch in front of me. I assured you that I shall get good marks in the examination. Please pray for my success.
Your daughter,
XXXX.
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sundarnazmy progress in studies is quite satisfactory.
This is possible but stilted.
sundarnazI go to the academy for attending my class for an hour after my school;
This is clumsy and wordy. You don't need the highlighted