Hi
Are the underlined phrases natural English? Any suggestions are welcome.
I was still in a shallow sleep when someone rang the bell.
Someone rang the bell and spoiled my sleep.
Someone rang the bell and broke my sleep.
I was about to go in a deep sleep when he returned from the office and woke me up.
Thanks,
Tom
Mr. Tom Are the underlined phrases natural English? Not entirely.
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Mr. TomAre the underlined phrases natural English?
Not entirely.
Mr. TomI was still in a shallow sleep when someone rang the bell.
Your choice is uncommon. Light would be better.
The following would be my choices.
I was still half asleep when someone rang the bell.
Someone rang the bell and [woke me up / interrupted my sleep].
I was about to go into a deep sleep when ....
CJ