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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

"To be advanced"

Hello!

Please, taking a look at my sentences can you see any mistake?

- I was advanced; however I missed the bus anyway.

- We got some water in spite of the drought.

- They’ll help her out as soon as she gets abroad.

- You’ll consider me for working as a parking lot attendant as soon as I give you my curriculum vitae.
- I became an instructor after I had practiced kick-boxing.

- I assisted the old lady after she had wheeled herself around.




Thank you,
Jim
  

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Anonymous You can / will be able to consider me for working as a parking lot 's attendant as soon as I give you my curriculum vitae. Others seem fine to me.

  • Anonymous You can / will be able to consider me for working as a parking lot 's attendant as soon as I give you my curriculum vitae.
  • Others seem fine to me.
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AnonymousYou can/will be able to consider me for working as a parking lot's attendant as soon as I give you my curriculum vitae.
Others seem fine to me.
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Thanks Fandorim!

Best wishes,
Jim
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Hi
I was advanced early .........

You'll consider me for (work as a parking lot attendant) / (the position of parking lot attendant) as soon as I give you my curriculum vita.
I became an instructor after becoming proficient in kick-boxing.
- I assisted the old lady after she ha
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Hi,Optilang

Many thanks for your corrections.But I didn't understand what you tried to show me in:

"You'll consider me for (work as a parking lot attendant) / (the position of parking lot attendant) as soon as I give you my curriculum vita."


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Hello Jim
And by the way why isn't correct to write "curriculum vitae" , but "curriculum vita"?
Apologies for vita - it was a typing error and should be vitae!
The old lady fell after she had wheeled h
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Hi, Optilang

Thanks for all your help up till now. Sorry to insist, but is my sentence below correct? Because you put some parts into brackets so, I'm not sure if it is wrong or not.

Here it is what I wrote: "You'll consider me for working as a parking lot attendant as soon as I give you my curriculum vitae"

This was your comment with some parts into b
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Hi Jim
People are considered for work, not for working, that is why I changed the sentence. The parts in brackets are 2 options for you to choose, either will be OK. So it means that there are 2 possible sentences:
either
"You'll consider me for work as a parking lot
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Hi,Optilang

Now I noticed what you were trying to tell me. Thank you! But I have a last question,please. You told me that people are considered for work, not for working. I've learned that after prepositions the verbs take the "ing" form. e.g.: Thanks for coming,
after listening, etc...So in this case,is it an exceptio
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Hi Jim
You told me that people are considered for work, not for working. I've learned that after prepositions the verbs take the "ing" form.
In my sentence 'work' is a noun, not a verb.
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Ah...I see! Thank you!!!

Best wishes,
Jim

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