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Cogar Posted 19 years ago
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Hi, does the sentence below sound elegant? The 2nd part is an explanation of why the company bought the machine. Thank you.

The company bought a new machine to produce high quality toys to supply to its new customer.
  

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Cogar Hi, does the sentence below sound elegant? The 2nd part is an explanation of why the company bought the machine. Thank you.

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  • Cogar Hi, does the sentence below sound elegant?
  • The 2nd part is an explanation of why the company bought the machine.
  • Thank you.
  • The company bought a new machine to produce high quality toys to supply to its new customer.
  • You have "to" three times in the sentence and "new" twice, so it is not elegant.
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CogarHi, does the sentence below sound elegant? The 2nd part is an explanation of why the company bought the machine. Thank you.

The company bought a new machine to produce high quality toys to supply to its new customer.
You have "to" three times in the sentence and "new" twice, so it is not elegant.

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Feebs11
CogarHi, does the sentence below sound elegant? The 2nd part is an explanation of why the company bought the machine. Thank you.

The company bought a new machine to produce high quality toys to supply to its new customer.
You have "to" three times in the sentence and "new" twice, so it
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