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Contiluo Posted 13 years ago
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to amuse people
Sorry, I rewrote the thread "to please everybody" as following. Is the paragraph below grammatically correct and natural to native speakers?
I’m an outgoing girl who likes to make friends. In most situations, I am fun-loving and easygoing. Sometimes, I act a little bit clownish to amuse people. I’m the life and soul of the party, who always brings laughs and joys to the people everywhere.
I’m an outgoing girl who likes to make friends. In most situations, I am fun-loving and easygoing. Sometimes, I act a little bit clownish to amuse people. I’m the life and soul of the party, who always brings laughs and joys to the people everywhere.
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The last sentence isn't quite natural. Perhaps I’m the life and soul of the party, the one who always brings laughter and joy to people everywhere I go.
- The last sentence isn't quite natural.
- Perhaps I’m the life and soul of the party, the one who always brings laughter and joy to people everywhere I go.
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The last sentence isn't quite natural. Perhaps I’m the life and soul of the party, the one who always brings laughter and joy to people everywhere I go.
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