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Dew 2007 Posted 19 years ago

To A Girl

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A girl of dream or distant blinking star?
You are so close, still you are so far.
I want to reach you, touch your tender hand,
But I’m afraid that you’ll misunderstand…

The heart and soul of mine is filled with you,
And no one will tell me what to do.
Should I escape from feelings and the Love?
Or should I yield to it and fly above?

You come to me in dreams. I see your face,
I feel your breath so close in my embrace.
In dreams I taste your lips and touch your skin
And I’m as happy as I’ve never been.

Oh, dear! What am I to do?
You can’t be mine, I can’t help loving you.
  

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*** I raise my eyes and see the cold sky It’s like a kind of wall so mighty great That separates me from the land of thine And puts me fully in the hands of fate. You’re far away behind this gloomy sky My lips can’t touch you in a gentle kiss. And snobbish clouds passing low by Will not remind me of my dear Miss.

  • *** I raise my eyes and see the cold sky It’s like a kind of wall so mighty great That separates me from the land of thine And puts me fully in the hands of fate.
  • You’re far away behind this gloomy sky My lips can’t touch you in a gentle kiss.
  • And snobbish clouds passing low by Will not remind me of my dear Miss.
  • My cry can’t reach you, but why should I cry, If all the sounds die imprisoned here?
  • The Heavens won’t let me even try To join my faithfully beloved dear.
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I raise my eyes and see the cold sky
It’s like a kind of wall so mighty great
That separates me from the land of thine
And puts me fully in the hands of fate.

You’re far away behind this gloomy sky
My lips can’t touch you in a gentle kiss.
And snobbish clouds passing low by
Will not remind me of my dear Miss.

My cry can’t reach you, but why shoul
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You need to work on your iambs if you want to write a sonnet.
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Fantastic!Oh, compatriot, your poems are awesome, I especially liked the first one.If you want to take a heart of a girl- just show this poem, that is so **** romantic[X]
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the wording is confusing, no real point. a few lines a kinda childish, and immaturely written. it didn't steal my heart.
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Nice work, but do you find it too complicated? Though some sentences are unuseless, but you better cut down some.

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