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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Tiu slepp
No 10 Aderito street,Fafunwa Estate
Ipaja Lagos-Nigeria
04/09/2010
Dear Tiu
How are you and your family?I heard about your mother delivering,was it succeessful i hope so,the purpose of writing this to you is to tell you that am going to have my birthday party soon and i hope you might come because it will be very exciting,interesting,and even lively.
that will be all for now please reply if comfirm
Ipaja Lagos-Nigeria
04/09/2010
Dear Tiu
How are you and your family?I heard about your mother delivering,was it succeessful i hope so,the purpose of writing this to you is to tell you that am going to have my birthday party soon and i hope you might come because it will be very exciting,interesting,and even lively.
that will be all for now please reply if comfirm
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Hi, Your writing is pretty good. Here is a more natural version. I've made it more informal.
- Hi, Your writing is pretty good.
- Here is a more natural version.
- I've made it more informal.
- No 10 Aderito street,Fafunwa Estate Ipaja Lagos-Nigeria 04/09/2010 Dear Tiu, How are you and your family?
- I hear you have a new brother.
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Hi,
Your writing is pretty good. Here is a more natural version. I've made it more informal.
No 10 Aderito street,Fafunwa Estate
Ipaja Lagos-Nigeria
04/09/201
Your writing is pretty good. Here is a more natural version. I've made it more informal.
No 10 Aderito street,Fafunwa Estate
Ipaja Lagos-Nigeria
04/09/201
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