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Jobb Posted 22 years ago
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GRE-tutoring class: Colluding with criminal ring and offering counterfeit professors

Psychological problem occurs because of suspected as a thief Female college student worries to be tested by lie-detector
  

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Which part is the title that needs editing, Jobb? 'GRE Tutoring Class'?

  • Which part is the title that needs editing, Jobb?
  • 'GRE Tutoring Class'?
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Which part is the title that needs editing, Jobb? 'GRE Tutoring Class'?
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(1) GRE-tutoring class: Colluding with criminal ring and offering counterfeit professors
(2) Psychological problem occurs because of suspected as a thief Female college student worries to be tested by lie-detector

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The font of "Psychological problem occurs because of suspected as a thief " should be bold, but the
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(1) GRE-tutoring class: collusion with criminal ring offering bogus professors


(2) Psychological problem developed by robbery suspect Co-ed worries about lie-detector test

Use bold (without the spaces between the b's and the brackets).


(Strange stories, Jobb.)

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Thanks for editing.

I think too little information caused the different understanding.

(1) The teachers of the class invited bogus professors (for example, they lay a graduate student even an undergraduate student as a professor so as to make big money. But the students didnt' belong to any criminal ring (at least no evidence shows that link). The teachers hired member

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