Based on the title rules in the attached file,
Are these sentence corrections right? If there's something wrong, please correct them.
2, Wrong : A Handbook For International Students In Canada
- wrong reasons : 1(not short),4(capitalization rules)
Corrected : A Handbook for International Students, Canada
4. Wrong: My Paragraph
- wrong reasons : 3(not catching readers' interest)
Corrected : My Special Experience - just as an example.
5. Wrong : How to Upload Your Family Vacation Photos to the Internet
- wrong reasons : 1(not short) ,3(not catching readers' interest)
Corrected : How to Upload Family Vacation Photos Effectively
6. Wrong : Buying A New Car Is Easy
- wrong reasons : 2(shouldn't be a complete sentence), 4(capitalization rules)
corrected : How to Buy a New Car Easily
8. Wrong : Today Was the Best Day of My Life
- wrong reasons : 2(shouldn't be a complete sentence), 4(capitalization rules)
corrected : Today, the Best Day of My Life
source : Great Writing by CENGAGE Learning
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