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Jimching Posted 15 years ago
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A proposed new Park and Ride in Roxas Boulevard Parañaque City the proposed project combine the two bus terminal of the Saulog transit Bus terminal and cavite-batangas-bataan bus terminal and to provide and built a bridge connection of MRT and LRT line 1 into the New Park and Ride and the other problem solving in the site is to less the crime at night in the boulevard especially below of LRT line 1 at baclaran terminal and make mini terminal for jeepneys attached in the existing project for all the passengers which deals with different routes.

please check this if my grammar is incorrect
  

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Hello, Jim - and welcome to English Forums. First, divide your paragraph into sentences, starting each one with a capital letter and ending each one with a period.

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Hello, Jim - and welcome to English Forums.

First, divide your paragraph into sentences, starting each one with a capital letter and ending each one with a period.

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