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Sun 94 Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Time slows down

If you see any mistakes in the following sentence, pleaes correct me. Thanks in advance.

( teacher to students)

People say time really flies when you are having fun, but time slows down when you are in school. I would like you to have fun in my class then, time will fly before you even notice it.
  

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I have underlined some problem areas: If you see any mistakes in the following sentence, pleaes correct me. Thanks in advance. ( teacher to students) People say time really flies when you are having fun, but time slows down when you are in school.

  • I have underlined some problem areas: If you see any mistakes in the following sentence, pleaes correct me.
  • Thanks in advance.
  • ( teacher to students) People say time really flies when you are having fun, but time slows down when you are in school.
  • I would like you to have fun in my class then, time will fly before you even notice it.
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I have underlined some problem areas:

If you see any mistakes in the following sentence, pleaes correct me. Thanks in advance.

( teacher to students)

People say time really flies when you are having fun, but time slows down when you are in school. I would like you to have fun in my class then, time will fly before you even notice it.
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This is the way I correct the mistake.

... in my class. If so, time will fly ..
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That's OK, but you can just do this:

my class; then time will fly

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