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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Time after time after time

Hi - I asked this question before but can not find the answer - if you have an informal sentence that uses words repetitively, how do you punctuate it? For example, "time after time after time we went to the river to fish"; or "many upon many of us went to the store that day". Must you always put the coma in, as in: "time, after time, after time, we went to the river..."; or "many, upon many {no coma} of us went to the stroe..."

The problem seems to be that, in these kinds of sentences, I have a lot of comas.

Thank you, Chris Williams
  

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Yes, the plethora of commas is the problem. Use commas only if they are necessary to maintain sense, proper sentence structure, and clarity. For your examples: Time after time after time , we went to the river to fish.

  • Yes, the plethora of commas is the problem.
  • Use commas only if they are necessary to maintain sense, proper sentence structure, and clarity.
  • For your examples: Time after time after time , we went to the river to fish.
  • Many upon many of us went to the store that day,
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Yes, the plethora of commas is the problem. Use commas only if they are necessary to maintain sense, proper sentence structure, and clarity. For your examples:

Time after time after time, we went to the river to fish.
Many upon many of us went to the store that day,
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Thank you so much for your help! Chris

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