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Nikitus Posted 9 years ago
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Tim arrived with Brian, 40 years old, stylish haircut

Hello.


Are the following sentences grammatically correct?


Tim arrived with Brian, 40 years old, stylish haircut, MGMT band shirt, and black pants with AMBER 27 olds, short hair, sweatshirt, and jeans. The two new members greeted Kelly warmly.



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Tim arrived with Brian, 40 years old, stylish haircut, MGMT band shirt no comma and black pants, and with Amber, 27 years old , short hair, sweatshirt, and jeans. The two new members greeted Kelly warmly. I assume Amber is a person.

  • Tim arrived with Brian, 40 years old, stylish haircut, MGMT band shirt no comma and black pants, and with Amber, 27 years old , short hair, sweatshirt, and jeans.
  • The two new members greeted Kelly warmly.
  • I assume Amber is a person.
  • Why are you calling Brian and Amber 'members;'?
  • eg Are they at a gym?
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Tim arrived with Brian, 40 years old, stylish haircut, MGMT band shirt no comma and black pants, and with Amber, 27 years old, short hair, sweatshirt, and jeans. The two new members greeted Kelly warmly.

I assume Amber is a person.

Why are you calling Brian and Amber 'members;'? eg Are they at a gym?

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