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New2grammar Posted 18 years ago
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Tiger as my pet

0Hollywood stars came out to save tigers. 02br
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00Hollywood big star Harrison Ford and another female star who I don't know and can't recall her name stepped forward and called for an immediate plan to save the endangered species. According to the paper, Harrison Ford is a long time animal rights activist. Did you know that? He gave a speech about endangered animals and how global demand for wild animals is causing populations of wild animals to shrink. Today, it's estimated that there are less than 1000 tigers left in the world and is expected that they will become extinct in this generation. I was shocked when I heard the numbers. Though I know they are endangered species, I never knew they were that endangered. Maybe media and animal activists distorted the numbers. I mean, I always hear people attacked by tigers. Anyway, I'm on Harrison's side. We should help the cats. In fact, I want to get one as a pet if allowed. 05002br
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0 Hollywood 01del 01span 00big02span 02del 00 star Harrison Ford and another female star who01span 02span 00 I don't know and 01span 00whose name I can't recall02span 00 01del 01span 00can't recall her name02span 02del 00 stepped forward and called for an immediate plan to save the endangered species. According to the paper, Harrison Ford is a long time animal rights activist. Did you know that?

  • 0 Hollywood 01del 01span 00big02span 02del 00 star Harrison Ford and another female star who01span 02span 00 I don't know and 01span 00whose name I can't recall02span 00 01del 01span 00can't recall her name02span 02del 00 stepped forward and called for an immediate plan to save the endangered species.
  • According to the paper, Harrison Ford is a long time animal rights activist.
  • Did you know that?
  • He gave a speech about endangered animals and how global demand for wild animals is causing populations of wild animals to shrink.
  • Today, it's estimated that there are less than 1000 tigers left in the world and 01span 00it's02span 00 01del 01span 00is02span 02del 00 expected that they will become extinct in this generation.
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0 Hollywood 01del01span00big02span02del00 star Harrison Ford and another female star who01span02span00 I don't know and 01span00whose name I can't recall02span00 01del01span00can't
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0Thanks, RayH. 02br
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00Out of curiosity, how does "hear people attacked by tigers" sound to you? 0-
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01cite10New2grammar12cite10Thanks, RayH. 12br
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10Out of curiosity, how does "hear people attacked by tigers" sound to you? 12br
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10OK, I understood what you meant when I first read the sentence but, strictly speaking, the way it's phrased it sounds like you were present at t
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0I see. Thanks, RayH. Your version is much better. 0-

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