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Kk Posted 21 years ago
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Ths usage of English.
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Can you help you check these sentences in term of grammar and semantics, please.
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Education just aims to equip students to make money and earn a rather comfortable live
A great masterpiece has power to enlighten students to develop the ability of abstract thinking.
It has a magic power to enable students to learn how to clear their mind and alleviate their stress.
Whenever a normal homework troubles them, students don’t know how to take it easy.
Can you help you check these sentences in term of grammar and semantics, please.
I appreciate what you do for me.
Education just aims to equip students to make money and earn a rather comfortable live
A great masterpiece has power to enlighten students to develop the ability of abstract thinking.
It has a magic power to enable students to learn how to clear their mind and alleviate their stress.
Whenever a normal homework troubles them, students don’t know how to take it easy.
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Hello, kk, a first attempt... 1) Education aims at equipping students to make money and earn a rather comfortable life. "at" is a preposition, so you'll want the -ing form here "live" is a verb, the noun is "life" 2) A great masterpiece enables the students to develop...
- Hello, kk, a first attempt...
- 1) Education aims at equipping students to make money and earn a rather comfortable life.
- "at" is a preposition, so you'll want the -ing form here "live" is a verb, the noun is "life" 2) A great masterpiece enables the students to develop...
- 3) there are too many "to"'s > its magic power makes students learn how to clear ...
- 4) students don't know how to take it easy whenever...
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Hello, kk, a first attempt...
1) Education aims at equipping students to make money and earn a rather comfortable life.
"at" is a preposition, so you'll want the -ing form here
"live" is a verb, the noun is "life"
2) A great masterpiece enables the students to develop...
3) there are too many "to"'s > its magic power makes students learn how to clear ...
4) studen
1) Education aims at equipping students to make money and earn a rather comfortable life.
"at" is a preposition, so you'll want the -ing form here
"live" is a verb, the noun is "life"
2) A great masterpiece enables the students to develop...
3) there are too many "to"'s > its magic power makes students learn how to clear ...
4) studen
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First sentence:
I'm pretty sure that you mean "living" rather than "live", which is a verb, or "life", which doesn't make sense. I'd change it to:
"Education just aims to equip students to make money and to earn a rather comfortable living."
Second sentence:
Something about this sentence sounds incredibly stilted, but I'm not sure what. I think it would sound
I'm pretty sure that you mean "living" rather than "live", which is a verb, or "life", which doesn't make sense. I'd change it to:
"Education just aims to equip students to make money and to earn a rather comfortable living."
Second sentence:
Something about this sentence sounds incredibly stilted, but I'm not sure what. I think it would sound
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