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John liao Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

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All in all, ICT has, actually, multi-dimensionally penetrated throughout all over New Zealand school education system. And all the participators, including organizations such as governments, schools, commercial corporations and charities, and experts such as politicians, teachers, principals, technicians, and of course, together with students will continue contributing and enjoying in digital education ages in New Zealand.

1. Does "throughout all over New Zealand school education system" make sense?
2. Are this sentences with lots of commas ",xx,xx,xx,xx" right?
  

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1. No 2. No.

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  • The part beginning with 'and of course together with students' does not fit with the preceding list.
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1. No
2. No. The part beginning with 'and of course together with students' does not fit with the preceding list.

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Yes, following:

All in all, ICT has, actually, multi-dimensionally penetrated throughout New Zealand school education system. And all the participators, including organizations such as governments, schools, commercial corporations and charities, and experts such as politicians, teachers, principals, technicians, and of course, students will continue contributing and enjoying in digital ed
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All in all, ICT has, actually and multi-dimensionally penetrated throughout whole New Zealand school education system. And all the participators, including organizations such as governments, schools, commercial corporations and charities, and experts such as politicians, teachers, principals, technicians, and of course, students will continue contributing and enjoying in digital education ages in
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All in all, ICT has, actually and multi-dimensionally penetrated throughout whole New Zealand school education system. And all the participators, including organizations such as governments, schools, commercial corporations and charities, and experts such as politicians, teachers, principals, technicians, and of course, students will continue contributing and enjoying in digital education ages in

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