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Kumenglish Posted 4 years ago
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Thrilling

The Beach visitors were watching the shark swimming a few meters away from the seashore, which gives them a beautiful and thrilling experience.

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Can we describe the moment " which gives a beautiful and thrilling experience"?

  

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kumenglish The Beach visitors were watching the shark swimming a few meters away from the seashore, which gives them a beautiful and thrilling experience. The beachgoers were watching the shark swimming a few meters from shore, a beautiful and thrilling sight. The common noun "beach" does not get capitalized.

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  • kumenglish The Beach visitors were watching the shark swimming a few meters away from the seashore, which gives them a beautiful and thrilling experience.
  • The beachgoers were watching the shark swimming a few meters from shore, a beautiful and thrilling sight.
  • The common noun "beach" does not get capitalized.
  • "Beach visitors" sounds like you don't know the word "beachgoers".
  • The seashore is all the land near the sea, and the shark was not any meters away from that.
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kumenglishThe Beach visitors were watching the shark swimming a few meters away from the seashore, which gives them a beautiful and thrilling experience.

The beachgoers were watching the shark swimming a few meters from shore, a beautiful and thrilling sight.

The common noun "beach" does not get capitalized. "Beach visitors" sounds like you don't know

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kumenglishwhich gives them a beautiful and thrilling experience.

I am wondering as to how I can say that unless the visitors themselves tell us they had such an experience.

I would say this:

The visitors were watching the shark swimming just a few meters away; They might have had a thrilling experience.

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