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Lucus Ong2 Posted 13 years ago
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Hi Teacher! Could you please help me check my sentences?
Recently, Mandarin pop singer Jolin Tsai fell flat on her face, while rehearsing two-person self-revolving pole dance (Two people use the same pole, and the pole revolves. Is there any better way to translate it) for her concert, as her partner dancer did not catch her in time. In pain, she wailed (Can I use this word to say she cried out loudly). But the 32-year-old singer has very tough personality. She decided to suspend it, and perform it in her next concert.
Great Thanks in Advance.
Recently, Mandarin pop singer Jolin Tsai fell flat on her face, while rehearsing two-person self-revolving pole dance (Two people use the same pole, and the pole revolves. Is there any better way to translate it) for her concert, as her partner dancer did not catch her in time. In pain, she wailed (Can I use this word to say she cried out loudly). But the 32-year-old singer has very tough personality. She decided to suspend it, and perform it in her next concert.
Great Thanks in Advance.
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Recently, Mandarin pop singer Jolin Tsai fell flat on her face, while rehearsing two-person self-revolving pole dance (Two people use the same pole, and the pole revolves. Is there any better way to translate it) for her concert, as her partner dancer did not catch her in time. In pain, she wailed (Can I use this word to say she cried out loudly).
- Recently, Mandarin pop singer Jolin Tsai fell flat on her face, while rehearsing two-person self-revolving pole dance (Two people use the same pole, and the pole revolves.
- Is there any better way to translate it) for her concert, as her partner dancer did not catch her in time.
- In pain, she wailed (Can I use this word to say she cried out loudly).
- But the 32-year-old singer has very tough personality.
- She decided to suspend it, and perform it in her next concert.
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Recently, Mandarin pop singer Jolin Tsai fell flat on her face, while rehearsing two-person self-revolving pole dance (Two people use the same pole, and the pole revolves. Is there any better way to translate it) for her concert, as her partner dancer did not catch her in time. In pain, she wailed (Can I use this word to say she cried out loudly). But the 32-year-old singer has very tough personal
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Hi!
(Recently, Mandarin pop singer Jolin Tsai fell flat on her face)( while rehearsing a two-person dance with a self-revolving pole.)( Her partner did not catch her in time.)
You changed the "as" between pole and Her into a period. Is it because her partner did not catch her in time was the cause of her felling flat on her face, and not their rehearsal? If I put "as" there it will so
(Recently, Mandarin pop singer Jolin Tsai fell flat on her face)( while rehearsing a two-person dance with a self-revolving pole.)( Her partner did not catch her in time.)
You changed the "as" between pole and Her into a period. Is it because her partner did not catch her in time was the cause of her felling flat on her face, and not their rehearsal? If I put "as" there it will so
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Recently, Mandarin pop singer Jolin Tsai fell flat on her face)( while rehearsing a two-person dance with a self-revolving pole.)( Her partner did not catch her in time.)
You changed the "as" between pole and Her into a period.
Is it because her partner did not catch her in time was the cause of her felling flat on her face, and not their rehearsal? No, I
You changed the "as" between pole and Her into a period.
Is it because her partner did not catch her in time was the cause of her felling flat on her face, and not their rehearsal? No, I
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