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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Three sentences

Can a English native tell me what is the matter with the grammar?

One : They look the same in some respect. They both have brown hair, blue eyes, squared jawline.
Two : From his demeanor, you can tell he's shy.
Three : She was so shockingly pretty that I couldn't stop staring.

Thank you teacher
  

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One : They look the same in some respect s . The rest are OK.

  • One : They look the same in some respect s .
  • The rest are OK.
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One : They look the same in some respects.

The rest are OK.
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One : Apart from there being a need to use correct concord, it is better style to finish a list with a coordinator:

They look the same in some respects. Each of them has brown hair, blue eyes, and a squared jawline.

Two : There is pleonasm involved in this statement. It is almost comparable to saying 'From his colour, you can tell he's white'.
However, since shyness is not q

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