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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Three quick questions

I just got a call from Amanda. She would just let me know that apparently her car broke down, so she's not coming.

Is "she would just let me know that" natural here?

Is "apparently" placed correctly in the sentence?

Anything else?

Thanks for your time.

  

Top answer

anonymous I just got a call from Amanda. She would just let me know that apparently her car broke down, so she's not coming. Omit 'would' and 'apparently'.

  • anonymous I just got a call from Amanda.
  • She would just let me know that apparently her car broke down, so she's not coming.
  • Omit 'would' and 'apparently'.
  • "She would let me know" does not imply that she really did let you know.
  • She said her car really broke down; she didn't say that apparently her car broke down.
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anonymousI just got a call from Amanda. She would just let me know that apparently her car broke down, so she's not coming.

Omit 'would' and 'apparently'.

"She would let me know" does not imply that she really did let you know.

She said her car really broke down; she didn't say that apparently her car broke down. Sh

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