Thousands of people
As the dawn thousands of people dreamt for has come, so a beautiful music can be heard in the hills.
Is this sentence correct for prose writing?
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sundarnaz Is this sentence correct for prose writing? Not so much. "As the dawn thousands" threw me.
- sundarnaz Is this sentence correct for prose writing?
- Not so much.
- "As the dawn thousands" threw me.
- "As the dawn that thousands" prevents that.
- You have used "so" in so strange a fashion that it comes off as antique grammar from an alternate universe, which might well be a good thing depending on the rest of the piece.
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sundarnazIs this sentence correct for prose writing?
Not so much. "As the dawn thousands" threw me. "As the dawn that thousands" prevents that. You have used "so" in so strange a fashion that it comes off as antique grammar from an alternate universe, which might well be a good thing depending on the rest of the piece. If thousands of people dreamt of it, w
0As the dawn thousands of people dreamt about for has come, so a beautiful music can be heard in the hills.
Is this sentence correct for prose writing? It seems very fancy,but if you want to use it in prose, that's your decision.
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