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Sundarnaz Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Thoughts / way of thinking

I changed my thoughts and it, in turn, changed my life.

I changed my way of thinking and it, in turn, changed my life.

Which of these sentences is correct, please? Have I punctuated the sentences correctly?

Thanks.

  

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sundarnaz Which of these sentences is correct, please? The grammar is OK in both, but "my way of thinking" is much better than "thoughts". sundarnaz Have I punctuated the sentences correctly?

— CalifJim

  • sundarnaz Which of these sentences is correct, please?
  • The grammar is OK in both, but "my way of thinking" is much better than "thoughts".
  • sundarnaz Have I punctuated the sentences correctly?
  • Yes.
  • I would have left out "in turn".
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sundarnazWhich of these sentences is correct, please?

The grammar is OK in both, but "my way of thinking" is much better than "thoughts".

sundarnazHave I punctuated the sentences correctly?

Yes. I would have left out "in turn". That is easily understood even if you don't say it.

CJ

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