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Katsumasa Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Thought of "Childlen of wolf man Ame and Yuki"
Hello all.
I am going to write a film's thoughts.
following,is this collect a grammer and spells?
It is Japanese animetion movie,I moved this film.
Because Hana(She is heroine) have became a mother,
and her partner is died in the rain day.
From there her serious life had began,but She don't give up her life when Occuring hard reality.She smiles everytime,and she orvercome difficulty days whith smiling.
I like her and I wish I changed my mind like her thinking.
Thank you.
I am going to write a film's thoughts.
following,is this collect a grammer and spells?
It is Japanese animetion movie,I moved this film.
Because Hana(She is heroine) have became a mother,
and her partner is died in the rain day.
From there her serious life had began,but She don't give up her life when Occuring hard reality.She smiles everytime,and she orvercome difficulty days whith smiling.
I like her and I wish I changed my mind like her thinking.
Thank you.
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Hello, katsumasa —and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to correct them and post your revised text here.
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- I have underlined some problem areas.
- Please try to correct them and post your revised text here.
- I am going to write a film's thoughts.
- following, is this collect a grammer and spells ?
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Hello, katsumasa —and welcome to English Forums.
I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to correct them and post your revised text here.
I am going to write a film's thoughts. following, is this collect a grammer and spells? It is Japanese animetion movie,I moved this film. Because Hana(She is heroine)
I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to correct them and post your revised text here.
I am going to write a film's thoughts. following, is this collect a grammer and spells? It is Japanese animetion movie,I moved this film. Because Hana(She is heroine)
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