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Radrook Posted 22 years ago
Though You be Unaware
All the sky is clear tonight
Your warmth is on my chest
My arm around your waist is tight
Your lips at my behest
Your eyes are sleeping--so I see
Your breathing shallow is
And you belong to only me
No need to steal a kiss.
My mind is clear for once tonight
No clouds have ruined its course
And I am holding you real tight
I the very first.
And you are lying silently
Within my strong embrace
And I would like the world to see
My face so near your face.
My eyes are troubled not tonight
with mists that cause a spill
and linger on your skin so white
Sometimes against my will
But if my will has lost tonight
and made them languish there....
I'll kiss you silently tonight
though you be unaware,
Your warmth is on my chest
My arm around your waist is tight
Your lips at my behest
Your eyes are sleeping--so I see
Your breathing shallow is
And you belong to only me
No need to steal a kiss.
My mind is clear for once tonight
No clouds have ruined its course
And I am holding you real tight
I the very first.
And you are lying silently
Within my strong embrace
And I would like the world to see
My face so near your face.
My eyes are troubled not tonight
with mists that cause a spill
and linger on your skin so white
Sometimes against my will
But if my will has lost tonight
and made them languish there....
I'll kiss you silently tonight
though you be unaware,
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Radrook, did you write that? It is beautiful. ~smiles~ It seems to go perfectly well with my idea of the roles of men and women.
- Radrook, did you write that?
- It is beautiful.
- ~smiles~ It seems to go perfectly well with my idea of the roles of men and women.
- Or perhaps I'm only putting my own ideas into what I've read.
- In any case, I'll post about it some other time.
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Radrook,
did you write that? It is beautiful. ~smiles~
It seems to go perfectly well with my idea of the roles of men and women. Or perhaps I'm only putting my own ideas into what I've read. In any case, I'll post about it some other time. I'm still too new here to show people I'm crazy...
Thank you for posting the poem.
Miriam
did you write that? It is beautiful. ~smiles~
It seems to go perfectly well with my idea of the roles of men and women. Or perhaps I'm only putting my own ideas into what I've read. In any case, I'll post about it some other time. I'm still too new here to show people I'm crazy...
Thank you for posting the poem.
Miriam
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I know someone who really is! Thanks for the poem! I want more, a lot more than that!
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Thank you for your compliments Miriam!
Yes, I wrote that poem many years ago when I used to write.
It was an expression coming from a deeply felt, painful, loneliness and a desperate desire of finding that one true love that seemed to be forever beyond my reach. During that time I composed poems to that hypothetical woman whom I knew must exist somewhere though I had not as yet met he
Yes, I wrote that poem many years ago when I used to write.
It was an expression coming from a deeply felt, painful, loneliness and a desperate desire of finding that one true love that seemed to be forever beyond my reach. During that time I composed poems to that hypothetical woman whom I knew must exist somewhere though I had not as yet met he
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I'm sorry to hear the poem was inspired by sad feelings, but I hope you've found the woman of your dreams, or that you will, eventually.
You no longer write? That's surely a pity.
Would you mind posting a few more of your poems, please? I'd love to read them.
You no longer write? That's surely a pity.
Would you mind posting a few more of your poems, please? I'd love to read them.
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Thank you for your well wishes Miriam.
There is a woman in my life right now who promises to fulfill my dreams.
If all goes well then that should become a realization very soon.
Yes it was a trying and sad time Miriam.
I guess the bright side is that it inspired me to write..
Of course all of us would rather be inspired by triumphs and happy things.
But usually
There is a woman in my life right now who promises to fulfill my dreams.
If all goes well then that should become a realization very soon.
Yes it was a trying and sad time Miriam.
I guess the bright side is that it inspired me to write..
Of course all of us would rather be inspired by triumphs and happy things.
But usually
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Congratulations! 
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Probably the thought and the deep feelings you put in your poems brought her to you.
I'm glad to see lif
)Probably the thought and the deep feelings you put in your poems brought her to you.
I'm glad to see lif
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Hi Maj:
Thank you for your kind words.
But I am a little confused.
What shows that I have a kind heart?
Kind Regards
Radrook
Thank you for your kind words.
But I am a little confused.
What shows that I have a kind heart?
Kind Regards
Radrook
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