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Quangtrungvtv Posted 17 years ago
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Those days so far away

last year I was so happy with my lover, Now I feel so sad, oh I am lonly , she was going far away, she went with her friend
  

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It's basically ok but we can put a few touches on it to make it flow better. I was very happy with someone I love last year. Now, she has gone far way with her friend, leaving me feeling so sad and lonely.

— Dimsumexpress

  • It's basically ok but we can put a few touches on it to make it flow better.
  • I was very happy with someone I love last year.
  • Now, she has gone far way with her friend, leaving me feeling so sad and lonely.
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It's basically ok but we can put a few touches on it to make it flow better.

I was very happy with someone I love last year. Now, she has gone far way with her friend, leaving me feeling so sad and lonely.
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Now when she hear my calling,but don't know story ,what should I do? I think I will forget ....
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