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PreciousJones Posted 13 years ago
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Those

I can now send and receive private messaging from those who are in New York and wants to meet up. I'll respond with my Whatsapp ID or PM it to me.

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I can now send and receive private messaging from those who are in New York and want to meet up. I'll respond with my Whatsapp ID or PM it to me. 'Those' is OK, but it seems a little formal-sounding for what seems to be a casual and tech-y message.

— Clive

  • I can now send and receive private messaging from those who are in New York and want to meet up.
  • I'll respond with my Whatsapp ID or PM it to me.
  • 'Those' is OK, but it seems a little formal-sounding for what seems to be a casual and tech-y message.
  • What does 'it' refer to, in '.
  • .
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I can now send and receive private messaging from those who are in New York and want to meet up. I'll respond with my Whatsapp ID or PM it to me.

'Those' is OK, but it seems a little formal-sounding for what seems to be a casual and tech-y message.

What does 'it' refer to, in '.
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CliveI can now send and receive private messaging from those who are in New York and want to meet up. I'll respond with my Whatsapp ID or PM it to me. 'Those' is OK, but it seems a little formal-sounding for what seems to be a casual and tech-y message.What does 'it' refer to, in '. . . or PM it to me'?Clive
The it refers to their Whatsapp ID.
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What can be used in place of those?
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You didn't previously mention 'their Whatsapp ID', so you can't refer to it as 'it'.

Clive
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What can be used in place of those? eg the word 'people'.

Clive
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