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Bewareo Posted 14 years ago
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If I could do something against piracy would be to change the model of the leisure industry. Putting movies, music, videogames and other at an affordable price. Also, if an artist is known for Internet gains popularity. That's good, because increased sales of its projects. And if someone does not like these ideas can always discuss other.
  

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Hi, No. Even the question in your title is not well-written. Here are a few comments.

  • Hi, No.
  • Even the question in your title is not well-written.
  • Here are a few comments.
  • If I could do something against piracy, it would be to change the model of the leisure industry.
  • The following 3 are not complete sentences.
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Hi,

No. Even the question in your title is not well-written.

Here are a few comments.

If I could do something against piracy, it would be to change the model of the leisure industry.

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