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Enkidu Posted 17 years ago
Firstly, I like to emphasize something; I am realy apprecitated for your precious help. Sometimes I may have forgetten to thank the person who helpmed me personally, please forgive me.
I am very aware of the effort.
Is there any mistake in the text below?
Dear Mr. Angelov
We would be honered to host a group of our sister city Balchik at the
International Childiren’s Festival of Dance of Pearls which will be held on between the 6/14/2009 and 6/19/2009 dates.
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Firstly, I like to emphasize something; I am realy apprecitated for your precious help. Sometimes I may have forgetten to thank the person who helpmed me personally, please forgive me.
I am very aware of the effort.
Is there any mistake in the text below?
Dear Mr. Angelov
We would be honered to host a group of our sister city Balchik at the
International Childiren’s Festival of Dance of Pearls which will be held on between the 6/14/2009 and 6/19/2009 dates.
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Dear Mr. Angelov We would be honoured to host a group from our sister city Balchik at the International Children’s Festival of Dance of Pearls which will be held between 6/14/2009 and 6/19/2009 .
- Dear Mr.
- Angelov We would be honoured to host a group from our sister city Balchik at the International Children’s Festival of Dance of Pearls which will be held between 6/14/2009 and 6/19/2009 .
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Dear Mr. Angelov
We would be honoured to host a group from our sister city Balchik at the International Children’s Festival of Dance of Pearls which will be held between 6/14/2009 and 6/19/2009.
We would be honoured to host a group from our sister city Balchik at the International Children’s Festival of Dance of Pearls which will be held between 6/14/2009 and 6/19/2009.
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Mr Wordy
We would be honoured to host a group from our sister city, Balchik, at the International Children’s Festival of Dance of Pearls which will be held between 6/14/2009 and 6/19/2009.
I would add the commas in red. This is an appositional structure. Examples: The man, John, was a Baptist. My wife, Artemi
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cwtchI would add the commas in red.Yeah, looking at it again it doesn't seem completely optimal how it was. I think "sister city of Balchik" would do too.
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