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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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His arguments are in alignment with green politics, in which the aims to create an ecologically sustainable society rooted in environmentalism are in polarised disagreement with capitalism, in which environmental legislation is subordinate to capital accumulation, maximising profits, and industrial propensity.

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He argues for "green" politics, which aims to create an ecologically sustainable society rooted in environmentalism. That is diametrically opposite to capitalism, in which environmental legislation is subordinate to capital accumulation, maximising profits, and industrial progress and unrestricted growth.

  • He argues for "green" politics, which aims to create an ecologically sustainable society rooted in environmentalism.
  • That is diametrically opposite to capitalism, in which environmental legislation is subordinate to capital accumulation, maximising profits, and industrial progress and unrestricted growth.
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He argues for "green" politics, which aims to create an ecologically sustainable society rooted in environmentalism. That is diametrically opposite to capitalism, in which environmental legislation is subordinate to capital accumulation, maximising profits, and industrial progress and unrestricted growth.

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