This sentence is right or wrong

Incorrect.

I'm not sure what it means, or I would give a suggestion on fixing it.

that's wrong...
if you wanna give a yes/no question, you have to one tense.
i give you a correct sentence..
"does she come ?"

Do you mean "Will she come?" (the future tense, basic way of asking if something will happen in the future, e.g. "Will it rain today?")

If so, you have two extra words and wrong word order.

'actually your sentence are right ' or actually your sentence is right ' ?

please help me

xoxo

nadia

Hi,

is

But both your sentences are incorrect because they do not start with a capital letter.

Clive