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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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This sentence is ok?

Please advise when will you get the coupon for us decide the gathering date.
  

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Hi, Please advise when will you get the coupon for us decide the gathering date. No. Please advise when you will .

  • Hi, Please advise when will you get the coupon for us decide the gathering date.
  • No.
  • Please advise when you will .
  • .
  • decide the gathering date seems to be a bit of a second sentence that you have just stuck on to the end of the first sentence.
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Hi,

Please advise when will you get the coupon for us decide the gathering date.

No.

Please advise when you will . . .



decide the gathering date seems to be a bit of a second sentence that you have just stuck on to the end of the first sentence. You need to make it a separate sentence.



What is a 'gathering date'?

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