0
Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
This sentence feels clumsy...
are there any possibilities to improve this sentence?
Application indicates that, according to Loan agreement No. 2346 and amendments thereof signed on October 5, 2000, the company gave a loan to John Smith in the amount of EUR 5666.
Thanks!
Application indicates that, according to Loan agreement No. 2346 and amendments thereof signed on October 5, 2000, the company gave a loan to John Smith in the amount of EUR 5666.
Thanks!
Top answer
Anonymous The application indicates ... You need "The" at the beginning. Other than that, the sentence is grammatical.
- Anonymous The application indicates ...
- You need "The" at the beginning.
- Other than that, the sentence is grammatical.
- Which part do you find clumsy?
- By the way, besides "give a loan" there is also "make a loan" and "grant a loan".
Get the Weekly English Kit 📬
New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.
1 Answers
0
AnonymousThe application indicates ...You need "The" at the beginning. Other than that, the sentence is grammatical. Which part do you find clumsy?
By the way, besides "give a loan" there is also "make a loan" and "grant a loan". "the company granted a loan" seems more in keeping with the legal language of the s
0
Related Questions