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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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This sentence does not sound right to me for some reason...

I'm reading a a passage in an LSAT review book and I came across this sentence:

"In the process, constitutional protections generally accorded an adult offender were not applied to proceedings involving a minor."

Is this sentence grammatically correct? There is something about the word "were" that doesn't sound right...

and it seems like the sentence would sound better if it were stated like this:

In the process, constitutional protections generally accorded [WITH] an adult

offender were not applied to proceedings involving a minor.
  

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" Is this sentence grammatically correct? There is something about the word "were" that doesn't sound right... Sounds fine to me.

  • " Is this sentence grammatically correct?
  • There is something about the word "were" that doesn't sound right...
  • Sounds fine to me.
  • The subject is the plural 'protections', not the word 'offender'.
  • and it seems like the sentence would sound better if it were stated like this: In the process, constitutional protections generally accorded [WITH] an adult offender were not applied to proceedings involving a minor.
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Hi,

I'm reading a a passage in an LSAT review book and I came across this sentence:

"In the process, constitutional protections generally accorded an adult offender were not applied to proceedings involving a minor."

Is this sentence grammatically correct? There is something about the word "were" that doesn't sound right... Sounds fine to me. The subject is the plural
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I still am slightly confused...

there must be a preposition in the phrase "generally accorded an adult offender". The word "accorded" is the preposition, right?

Thanks!
-Jon
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Hi,

I still am slightly confused...

there must be a preposition in the phrase "generally accorded to an adult offender".

The word "accorded" is the preposition, right?

No, 'accord' is a past participle describing 'protections'.

ie protections ( that were generally granted (to) an adult offender )

The preposition 'to' is optio

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