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Uktous Posted 16 years ago
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Hi,

Background:

The following sentence is in my job application cover letter.
I talked about my experience and skills.

Someone says the sentence is unnatural.

Question:
Could you please rewrite me sentence to be a natural sentence?

Sentence:
Besides, I was a teacher. This position required excellent communication skills.

Thanks


The whole letter is:

xx xx

xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xxx
xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xxx

xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xxx
xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xxx

Besides, I was a teacher. This position required excellent communication skills.

xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xxx
xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xx xxx

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XX XXX Xxx
  

Top answer

It's hard to judge the problem without the context, but I suspect this will improve it: I was also a teacher, which requires excellent communication skills.

— Mister Micawber

  • It's hard to judge the problem without the context, but I suspect this will improve it: I was also a teacher, which requires excellent communication skills.
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It's hard to judge the problem without the context, but I suspect this will improve it:

I was also a teacher, which requires excellent communication skills.
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