Hi, English native speakers. Is this OK or should I change anything?
Lenny enters the cafe and goes to the counter. No one's behind it. But then a guy comes out from the back.
The language is very casual, so if this is an academic assignment, I would change the vocabulary. If it is for conversation, it's fine.
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The language is very casual, so if this is an academic assignment, I would change the vocabulary. If it is for conversation, it's fine.