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JKBelieve Posted 21 years ago
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This myth justified the reign of the royal family of the ancient kingdom of Go-Jo-Seon

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00This myth justified the reign of the royal family of the ancient kingdom of Go-Jo-Seon 0-
  

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" (or maybe "sovereignty" instead of "reign" if you want to stress their right to rule) 0-

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  • " (or maybe "sovereignty" instead of "reign" if you want to stress their right to rule) 0-
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0 It doesn't really sound bad to me, but if you don't like it, how about "In the ancient kingdom of Go-Jo-Seon, this myth justified the reign of the the royal family." (or maybe "sovereignty" instead of "reign" if you want to stress their right to rule) 0-
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0 Sometimes such repetitions can enhance the sense of portentousness in a phrase. You often find them in royal titles, for instance. 02br
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