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Lovi Gupta Posted 7 years ago

THIS MY FIRST POEM ON A TREE......

ONE AND TWO

WHEN I SAW YOU.

YOU WERE SMALL

WHEN NO LEAVES FALL.

THREE AND FOUR

WHEN LEAVES WERE MANY MORE.

FLOWERS WERE MORE AND FRUITS TOO WERE MORE.

FIVE AND SIX

WHEN NOTHING WAS FIXED.

BRANCHES WERE OUT WHICH MADE ME SHOUT.

SEVEN AND EIGHT

WHEN NOTHING WAS WASTE.

EVERYTHING WAS USED,WHICH MADE THIS WORLD SO HUGE.

NINE AND TEN

NOW ITS TIME TO END

TREE DIED WITH SORROWFUL SHOUT

AND AGAIN ANOTHER SEED SPROUT

  

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Clever poem! I changed 3 things. NINE AND TEN NOW it's TIME TO END TREE DIED WITH SORROWFUL sigh AND AGAIN ANOTHER SEED did SPROUT

— Nel0506

  • Clever poem!
  • I changed 3 things.
  • NINE AND TEN NOW it's TIME TO END TREE DIED WITH SORROWFUL sigh AND AGAIN ANOTHER SEED did SPROUT
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Clever poem!

I changed 3 things.

NINE AND TEN

NOW

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