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Ayan86 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

This looks clumsy...

Hi!

This looks clumsy to me... How can I improve it?

The 1st attachment details the client information on the procedure for filling- in the submission.

Thank you!!
  

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When you find yourself with a clumsy sentence, try changing the subject of the sentence. Clients will find instructions in the first attachment for filling out the forms and submitting them.

— Deadrat

  • When you find yourself with a clumsy sentence, try changing the subject of the sentence.
  • Clients will find instructions in the first attachment for filling out the forms and submitting them.
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When you find yourself with a clumsy sentence, try changing the subject of the sentence.

Clients will find instructions in the first attachment for filling out the forms and submitting them.

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