This is Urgent, please!

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00 I hope you are doing well,02br
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00 This is my letter of purpose, I have finished it, and I would like to get some notes about, please, would you mind if you take just a minute and look, if it's OK or I should make some changes,02br
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00 An other question, Can I write my letter of motivation in more than one sheet, or it shouldn't be so?! 02br
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00 If I do ask you that, it's because I trust you, 02br
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00 thank you very much in advace.02br
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00 Hoping to receive from you soon,02br
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00 Ahmed02br
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01font00Dear Sir/Madam;02font02br
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01font00I am a graduate of the 00 and holder of a BA degree in Political Science with special interest in International Relations. I am seeking to join a prestigious institution where I can further enrich my knowledge and better prepare myself for a career in Political science.02font02br
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01font00Politics have always been my favorite subject that I have followed with special interest. I find a great enjoyment in following current events with critics and reading about people who made history and politics. Politics to me is not only a science, but also an art. International Relations is my favorite focus. I believe that now, more than ever, we need great politicians to bring people together and bridge cultures and ideologies for a better world. Great people have achieved that in the past and I am eager to be part of people who will make history for generations to come. 02font02br
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01font00In search of a prestigious university where I can prepare for my political ambitions, 00 stood out as one of the top choices for its world reputable Political Science program. I have read about your institution and discussed it with my mentors and I strongly feel that I would be happy and satisfied with the training and experience I would enjoy there. 02font02br
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01font00I had my first exposure to Politics Sciences when I was in High school. After I graduated at the top of my class, I had to convince my family about my desire in a political career. It was a challenge since they were all in business and had little knowledge of the importance of the science. I finally moved to 00 to complete my four-year program. I not only excelled in all subjects, as my professors would testify, but I also enjoyed every day I spent learning about this art and science. Mastering different languages is an important tool for any politician. I personally master and speak fluently four languages including my mother tongue Berber, Arabic, French and of course English. After graduation, I took a job as English teacher while putting my next plan together. 00I felt one of the most gratifying and heartwarming feelings I have ever felt in my life. I felt that I am actually making a difference and positively affecting many lives and generations. Mastering the art of Karate made me strong, disciplined and well balanced.02font02br
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01font00My strong enthusiasm, personal experience as well as my excellent academic background have made me a strong candidate for your Political Science program.02font02br
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01font00I am looking forward to hearing from you soon and join your great University.02font02br
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01font00Respectfully yours,02font02br
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01font00Ahmed02font02br
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00That's all,, thanks again! 05002br
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00 Ahmed!010id5