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Topic: Computer games are very bad for people and they cause a lot of problems, what do you think about that?

Science has proven that playing computer games (video games) are good for young children. It helps to practice thinking, reflecting, observing, and self-managing. When people are too abusive, computer games become worse.

Children are regular internet users but do not have enough knowledge to prevent themselves from dangers on the internet. Nowadays there are lots of commercials and funny video clips created to entertain the majority of adults, however, kids just "Google" sites are able to come in contact with bad pictures.

If abusing the internet in the entertainment, it will adversely affect the health of users. In addition, the frequent play online games - the type of entertainment attracted a lot of participants, especially the young. Lead to game addiction when you play too much, they will become addicts forget their real life, drowning in psychedelic life and find ways to satisfy their addiction even to the implementation of negative behavior, criminal conduct and criminal offenses.