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Thành Long Vũ Posted 9 years ago
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This is the first time I write Ielts task 1. Please give me your opinion about the task

The table compares the information of million television viewers in sports by four different country. It's clear that tennis has the the most viewers on television. However, The total number of viewer all sports in USA is higher than other country.

In general tennis is the most popular sport on television in all four countries. There is nearly 26 million viewers and each country about 6 to 7 million people watch it. Beside, Golf is the second popular sport that has 22 million viewers but it's more popular in the USA with 11 million people watch on TV.

Not many people like watching motor racing on their televison with another sports. It is only 1 to 1.5 million people watch motor racing in the USA and Canada but the number of viewers for motor racing is more higher in the UK and Australia. Athletics has steady stream viewer with 3 to 5 million viewers in four countries.

  

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It is pretty good for the first time. I have highlighted the errors in yellow and also indicated where necessary words have been omitted. If you have questions, please reply.

  • It is pretty good for the first time.
  • I have highlighted the errors in yellow and also indicated where necessary words have been omitted.
  • If you have questions, please reply.
  • The table compares the information of million (missing word) television viewers in sports by four different country .
  • It's clear that tennis has the the most viewers on television.
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It is pretty good for the first time. I have highlighted the errors in yellow and also indicated where necessary words have been omitted. If you have questions, please reply.



The table compares the information of million (missing word) television viewers in sports

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