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Feraseooda Posted 16 years ago
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This is the first time I write English ,HOPE YOU HELP ME

Hello everybody Iam anew member her is this site and this is my topic and will be happy if someone help me if i have mistakes in grammer ,i tried to write with present simple

At first , I choose this novel because it is an interesting and full of events and adventures which embodied the character of aprimitive man. Robenson crusoe is aman living in amiddle class , and he loves the sea and the adventures so mush .He decides to leave the house in order to travels across the sea but his father rejects his request for leaving and going away ,his father gives him advice because Robenson is the youngest son and his brothers were killed .Robenson rejects to obey his father and insistes to leaving the house.

Robenson left the home on ajourney towards the sea and the storms starts to hit the ship from each side ,the waves begans to slam ,he felts with remorse because he does not take his father's advice seriously ,the storms becoms more intensity ,In that time he says that what happens is God's punishment for disobeying his parents , and he starts praying for God to brings him back to his home and his parents .

In my opinion , Robenson is an ambitious man ,but he his hasty when he decides to leave home and disobeyy his father , so the idea that i admir with , is that he begans to close to God ,it indicates about his regret ,and he knows that this is God punishment.

  

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Hello everybody . I am a new member her e on this site , and this is my topic . I will be happy if someone will help me if I have mistakes in gramm a r .

  • Hello everybody .
  • I am a new member her e on this site , and this is my topic .
  • I will be happy if someone will help me if I have mistakes in gramm a r .
  • I tried to write with present simple .
  • At first, I choose this novel because it is interesting .
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Hello everybody. I am a new member here on this site, and this is my topic. I will be happy if someone

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