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Angliholic Posted 18 years ago
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This is the first article in a five-part series about Ruth's experiences
In 2007, English teacher Ruth was sponsored by Studio Classroom and the New Zealand Trade Development Centre to visit New Zealand families as well as visiting tow different schools. This is the first article in a five-part series about Ruth's experiences.
Hi,
I find it hard to understand the part in bold in the above. Is it proper to reword it as "This is the first of the five articles about Ruth's experiences?" Thanks.
Hi,
I find it hard to understand the part in bold in the above. Is it proper to reword it as "This is the first of the five articles about Ruth's experiences?" Thanks.
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The original is clear and correct. Alternative: This is the first in a series of five articles about Ruth's experiences.
- The original is clear and correct.
- Alternative: This is the first in a series of five articles about Ruth's experiences.
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The original is clear and correct.
Alternative:
This is the first in a series of five articles about Ruth's experiences.
Alternative:
This is the first in a series of five articles about Ruth's experiences.
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Marius HancuThe original is clear and correct.Thanks, Marius.
Alternative:
This is the first in a series of five articles about Ruth's experiences.
Your version sounds much better!
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