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Super Sonic Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

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1font00Hi everyone, I am from Turkey and I have a problem: Yesterday I learned that I got 56 points out of 100 from the writing lesson, which made me sad05000(I am a university student) The teacher said that my essay wasn't coherent and that MY ENGLISH WAS POOR05100 I have written another cause&effect essay like that one to learn if my English is really that poor. Please be honest and tell me the truth. I won't be sad if you tell me that my English is bad(Well, I will but it is at least better than THINKING that I have a good English) Thanks all in advance.02br
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01font00CAUSES OF HAVING POOR MARKS AT SCHOOL02font02br
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00Students00’ getting poor grades has always been a problem, both for the parents and for the student himself. It is a problem, as students’ fate is built mostly on their grades. The causes of this issue could be categorized under three major groups.02br
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00The first and most important reason of having poor grades at school is not studying the lesson. Studying is a must for the student to grasp the information given in the lecture. That is why teachers assign homeworks. Not studying stems from several reasons, one of which is being in an uncomfortable position at home. I know a lot of people who don’t have their own rooms at home. They are forced by the conditions to study in the living room, where lots of attention-dividing items exist. There are also those who don’t study, thinking that it actually is not needed. Whatever the reason may be, students who don’t study usually get poor marks from exams.02br
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00The second serious problem is the lack of communication among the teacher and students. To be able to learn, one needs to ask questions. But, in a threatening environment it is hard to talk about the subject, let alone asking questions. For example; a friend of mine told me that they were not allowed to speak in the classes, be it about the lecture or something else. He said that even though he studied his lessons, he didn’t understand them and that he hesitated to ask to the teacher. I don’t know anyone who could be successful in such a situation.02br
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00The last reason causing students to get bad grades is having difficulties understanding the lesson. I know a student attending a high school. He gets along perfectly with his mathematics teacher, asks whatever question comes into his mind to him and studies his lessons daily; nonetheless, his marks are nothing but poor. He says that he doesn’t understand mathematics at all.02br
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00In conclusion, students get bad marks because of such reasons as not studying the lessons, having problems with the teacher and having problems with the lesson. But, none of these hardships should prevent the pupil from trying harder, since his/her future life is made up of these marks. 02br
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0 01blockquote 01cite 10Super Sonic12cite 11font 10Hi everyone, I am from Turkey and I have a problem: Yesterday I learned that I got 56 points out of 100 from the writing lesson, which made me sad15010(I am a university student) The teacher said that my essay wasn't coherent and that MY ENGLISH WAS POOR15110 I have written another cause&effect essay like that one to learn if my English is really that poor. Please be honest and tell me the truth. 12font 10 It is a problem, as 11font 10the 12font 10students’ fate is built mostly on their grades.

  • 0 01blockquote 01cite 10Super Sonic12cite 11font 10Hi everyone, I am from Turkey and I have a problem: Yesterday I learned that I got 56 points out of 100 from the writing lesson, which made me sad15010(I am a university student) The teacher said that my essay wasn't coherent and that MY ENGLISH WAS POOR15110 I have written another cause&effect essay like that one to learn if my English is really that poor.
  • Please be honest and tell me the truth.
  • 12font 10 It is a problem, as 11font 10the 12font 10students’ fate is built mostly on their grades.
  • 12br 12br 10The first and most important reason 11font 10of 11font 10[for] 12font 12font 10having poor grades at school is not studying the lesson.
  • Studying is a must for the student to grasp the information given in the lecture.
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01cite10Super Sonic12cite11font10Hi everyone, I am from Turkey and I have a problem: Yesterday I learned that I got 56 points out of 100 from the writing lesson, which made me sad15010(I am a university student) The teacher said that my essay wasn't coherent and that MY ENGLISH WAS POOR15110 I have
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1font00Hi, I really want to help you as the best as I could. But, I am not a native speaker of English and honestly, I am not very good in English. But, I have some ideas about this topic that I want to share with you, my dear friend (^^,) – (guys, please help me too..hehe~)02font02br
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0I completely agree with you. i have learned from mistakes and the way they are corrected. But what does "non-sequitur" mean?0-
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0That's when you say something that is not connected to what came before it.02br
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