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The traveling mindset benefits ordinary people either in political or economic aspects. People’s voice and opinion are more likely to be review and accept by governments and companies. As people’s voice become more important to authorities, people will gain more power over political and economic fields. However, do companies and governments need to take every opinion from their people? Therefore, Companies should also have a “fence” to decide whether they should take the opinion or not based on the relevancy of opinion that their people have proposed.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

Hi liudanqing;

Welcome to the forums. Here are some suggestions:

Note that "people" is plural, so "voice" and "opinion" must also be plural.
A "field" is a topic for study. Use "politics" and "the economy."
People do not propose opinions. They can state their opinion, change their opinion or have an opinion.

The traveling mindset benefits ordinary people either in political or economic aspects. People’s voice and opinion are more likely to be review and accept by governments and companies. As people’s voice become more important to authorities, people will gain more power over political and economic fields. However, do companies and governments need to take every opinion from their people? Therefore, Companies should also have a “fence” to decide whether they should take the opinion or not based on the relevancy of opinion that their people have proposed.

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