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Some people believe that if a person once becomes a criminal, he will always be a criminal. To what extent do you agree/disagree with this statement?

It is undoubted to say that the way people think change along with the variation of the societies, but it doesn't mean that everything has finished its changing. The way societies consider offenders has long been the subject of intense discussions. Some people point out that once committing a crime, a person will always be a criminal. Personally, I complety disagree with this viewpoint.

On the one hand, there appears to an explainable fear of re-offenders when they are put back to societies, arised from common attitudes. For instance, in the United States, almost 44 percent return before the end of their first year out. Many people being delinquent have the blood of craving for sins has flown through their veins for ages. A leopard can't change its spots, so then they will do evilest things once again, no matter how long they were in prison. Besides, it seems harsh for criminals to get back to life normally. Due to this fear, employers can barely hire the ones who got previous convictions to work for them. Hard to ake out a living, the ones who just expired imprisonment lapse into crime again: pickpocket, shoplifting,... Difficulties looming everywhere is acting as deterrent for those trying to turn back.

Nevertheless, despite the deterrent, emancipists have been trying to prove the opposite side. Nowadays, lots of communities are working as the normalization sector for criminals who finished their time. In addition, the major part of the released didn’t get back to prison. It is no more inhuman than refuse their attempt: above all crimes they committed, they’re human and have the same rights to correct the faults with others. For example, Tran Nhut Thanh, because of penurious and wandering childhood, had four times being in jail. Finally, he turned back to life and became a factory worker. When the will to live outweighs the “cold blood”, a criminal can become just a person with no one-sided attitudes on.

In conlusion, I strongly believe that there’s no limit for criminals when coming back to life. The success of this process are combined by the willing of communities and offenders theirselves.