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The bar graph displays the proportion of Australian males and females in 6 age groups who did daily exercise by 2010.

Overall, the average percentage of both gender indicated that women exercised more than men. Men between the age of 15 to 24 and women aged from 45 to 54 had the highest proportion in total.

In 2010, over 50 percent of females from the 35 to 64 age group did exercise regularly, while males in the same age group were much lower, ranging from 39.5 to 45.1 percent. The 15 to 24 age group was the only group that the percentage of men taking physical activities higher than that of women, 52.8% and 47.7% respectively.

There is nearly 49% of females and only 42.2% of males doing exercise usually at the age of 25 to 34. From 65 and over age group men indicate a relatively similar proportion as women, 46.7 and 47.1 percent respectively.