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LINH TRAN THI DIEU Posted 5 years ago
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This is my Writing Task 1. Could you please review it ? Thank you so much.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between1979 and 2004.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.


The line graph shows the consumption of fish and three kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004.
Overall, it is clear that the amount of chicken eaten increased over that time. In contrast, consumers gradually tend to eat less beef, lamb and fish.
Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that each person in this nation used about 220grams beef a week, compared to about 150 grams chicken and lambs. Fish had the lowest consumption, with about 60 grams. However, in the end of the period, beef consumption decreased significantly to only 100 grams while the figure for chicken showed a dramatic rise to peak at approximately 250 grams per person. The average consumption of lamb declined gradually to just over 50 grams per week. It can be seen that fish remained almost stable at roughly 50 grams over the period despite a short and slow drop from 1979 to 1982.

  

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