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Jisu Posted 11 years ago
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This is my school essay! plz help me is there anything wrong grammar or word i use

The story begins at the end. This is the most interesting book I’ve ever read because usually most book used to start from the beginning. Also most commonly, People focuses on stimulating part like death when they read a book or watch on TV. So do I. Therefore the story start with the end made me concentrated.This book started with Eddie’s death who was old and worked at Ruby Pier for a long time. People called him ‘Eddie Maintenance.’ Eddie died accidently at the amusement park, at the Ruby Pier. For Eddie that day was also just an ordinary day until that accident happened. Eddie found that one of the carts in Freddy’s Free Fall which was new ride was tilted at an angle
  

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