This is my recommend letter which I wrote ( please help me corect grammar, vocabulary, or anything you need a change

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I am privileged to write in support of my dear employee and colleague, Nguyen Minh Duong. I have known Duong for the past five years, having served as both his employer and his colleague. During this time I have witnessed his tremendous growth and development. This development comes not only in the area of leadership but in maturity and character as well. I believe Duong would be an excellent addition to your course.

Duong is known as an innovative young male teacher in the school's foreign language group and expected to bring improvements in teaching methods and student career orientation. I wish Lao Cai High School for the gifted to comprehensively innovate the way of teaching and learning English at school and to be an innovative model replicated in Lao Cai province. I expect and fully believe in Duong after this master's course, he can advise the school to build a perfect English program both in theory and practicality. In addition, organizing extracurricular activities to develop life skills for students needs organizers with leadership qualities. I have found that in Duong in organizing English club extracurricular activities where he is the chairman. Especially, an extra-curricular program called 12-hour Challenge has been an extra-curricular model for schools in the whole province.In recent years, the rate of unemployed school students after graduating from university is increasing because initial career orientation is not effective. Therefore, having been learned new methods and new knowledge related to vocational education, Mr. Duong will be the main factor to solve this problem.

Until now, Mr. Duong has been known as a leader in the Ho Chi Minh Communist Youth Union at the school. He used to hold the position of secretary for many years before. Mr. Duong impressed me with his students' management skills.In fact, Lao Cai High School for gifted students is known for the learning environment where students have a high sense of discipline, this has a significant contribution of Mr. Duong as the head of the student management board. I also appreciate Mr. Duong’s creativity and enthusiasm through the radio program called La Casette founded by him. The radio program is a place to answer all students' questions about learning, school or future career orientation for students through daily broadcast news.

Given the excellent education of your university, I am confident that Duong will be able to prepare himself at best for future endeavors. He has my highest recommendation, and I am happy to furnish more details if you would like additional information.

If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at (+84)888736888 or Email Removed

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Nguyen Duong 4934 This is a my recommendation letter which I wrote. ( Please help me correct grammar, vocabulary, or anything you need to change.)

What is the recommendation for? A job?

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I am privileged to write in support of my dear employee and colleague, Nguyen Minh Duong. I have known Duong for the past five years, having served as both his employer and his colleague. During this time I have witnessed his tremendous growth and development. This development comes not only in the area of leadership but in maturity and character as well. I believe Duong would be an excellent addition to your course. (?)

Duong is known as an innovative young ~~male~~ teacher in the school's foreign language group ~~and~~ expected to bring improvements in teaching methods and helping students make career choices. ~~orientation~~. I wish Lao Cai High School for the Gifted to would comprehensively innovate ~~the way of~~ its methods of teaching ~~and learning~~ (The school does not learn English. The students do.) English ~~at school~~ and to be an innovative model to be replicated throughout the in Lao Cai province. I expect and fully believe that in Duong, after this master's course, he can advise the school to build a perfect English program both in theory and practice ~~ality~~. In addition, organizing extracurricular activities to develop life skills for students needs organizers with leadership qualities. I have found that in Duong as he organized English club extracurricular activities where he is the chairman. ~~Especially~~, An extra-curricular program called 12-hour Challenge has been an extra-curricular model for schools in the whole province.In recent years, the rate of unemployment ed among our school's ~~school~~ students after graduating from university has been is increasing because the initial career orientation is not effective. Therefore, having been learned new methods ~~and new knowledge~~ related to vocational education, Mr. Duong will be expected ~~the main factor~~ to solve this problem.

Until now, Mr. Duong has been known as a leader in the Ho Chi Minh Communist Youth Union at the school. He used to hold the position of secretary ~~for~~ many years before. Mr. Duong impressed me with his students' management skills.In fact, Lao Cai High School for Gifted Students is known for the learning environment where students have a high sense of discipline, (comma splice error) this has had a significant contribution from Mr. Duong as the head of the student management board. I also appreciate Mr. Duong’s creativity and enthusiasm through the radio program called La Casette which he founded ~~by him.~~ The radio program is a place to answer all students' questions about learning, school or their future careers ~~orientation~~ for students through daily broadcast news.

Given the excellent education of your university, I am confident that Duong will be able to prepare himself ~~at best~~ for future endeavors. He has my highest recommendation, and I am happy to furnish more details if you would like additional information.

If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at (+84)888736888 or Email Removed

Nguyen Duong 4934 · Answer

Why should the applicant be considered for a Scholarship?

To whom it may concern,

I am Nguyen Thi Van Khanh, currently the leader of foreign language group of Lao Cai High School for The Gifted, Lao Cai Province, Vietnam. I have had the pleasure to work with Nguyen Minh Duong since 2011 when he was still a high school teacher at a remote mountainous district in Lao Cai province. Over the past few years, Duong has demonstrated excellent progress both professionally and personally, which sets his apart as one of the most outstanding young teachers at our school.

I see in Duong the effort to pursue modern education methods to help many Lao Cai students learn English effectively. Three years of teaching at a remote school in Lao Cai province, he introduced English to ethnic minority students for the purpose of learning English to serve tourism. Mr. Duong then decided to move the job to the city with a view to having more knowledge about modern educational methods. With the knowledge learned from a short course on teaching methodology and pedagogy in Singapore, he is now one of the pioneering teachers in approaching modern education methods, especially STEM method in English teaching - an English learning method through small projects related to science, technology, engineering and math.Thanks to this method, my school students learn English from practical engineering project jobs. Therefore, I hope that the master of education course will equip Duong with in-depth knowledge of teaching methods and teaching programs to help us truly innovate English teaching and learning at school.

I appreciate the leadership and cooperation in Duong's work in http://truonghocketnoi.edu.vn/ - a professional exchange forum of teachers in Lao Cai. Here, he has taken charge of the leader of the professional activity group. Many of the lectures he has posted on the website have been a reference source for many teachers and students at my school. We are pleased that Duong organizes professional exchange sessions, sharing teaching experiences with high school teachers in Lao Cai city on this forum. Therefore, this will be a fascinating place where Duong will bring new knowledge he learns to help and share with many other teachers in difficult areas of Lao Cai province who have no chance to study and access modern education.

For all of Mr. Duong’s contributions, I highly recommend Duong as a candidate for your master program. Should I have to give more information regarding Duong or this recommendation, please do not hesitate to contact me.

AlpheccaStars · Answer

To whom it may concern,

I am Nguyen Thi Van Khanh, currently the leader of the foreign language group of Lao Cai High School for the Gifted, Lao Cai Province, Vietnam. I have had the pleasure to work with Nguyen Minh Duong since 2011 when he was still a high school teacher in at a remote mountainous district in Lao Cai province. Over the past few years, Duong has demonstrated excellent progress both professionally and personally, which sets his (wrong form) apart as one of the most outstanding young teachers at our school.

I see in Duong the effort to use ~~pursue~~ modern education methods to help many Lao Cai students learn English effectively. During his three years of teaching at a remote school in Lao Cai province, he introduced English to ethnic minority students for the purpose of learning English to work in the tourist industry. ~~serve~~ ~~tourism~~. Mr. Duong then decided to move the job to the city with a view to getting ~~having~~ more knowledge about modern educational methods. With the knowledge learned from a short course on teaching methodology and pedagogy in Singapore, he is now one of the pioneering teachers in employing ~~approaching~~ modern education methods, especially the STEM method in English teaching. That is - an English learning method by doing through small projects related to science, technology, engineering and math.Thanks to this method, my school's students learn English from doing practical engineering projects jobs. Therefore, I hope that the master of education course will equip Duong with in-depth knowledge of teaching methods and teaching programs to help us truly innovate English teaching and learning at school.

I appreciate the leadership and cooperation in Duong's work in http://truonghocketnoi.edu.vn / - a professional exchange forum of teachers in Lao Cai. Here, he has taken ~~charge of the~~ leadership of the professional activity group. Many of the lectures he has posted on the website have been a reference source for many teachers and students at my school. We are pleased that Duong organizes professional exchange sessions, sharing teaching experiences with high school teachers in Lao Cai city on this forum. Therefore, this will be a fascinating place where Duong will bring the new knowledge he learns to help and share with many other teachers in difficult areas of Lao Cai province who have no chance to study and access modern education.

For all of Mr. Duong’s contributions, I highly recommend Duong as a candidate for your master's program. Should I have to give more information regarding Duong or this recommendation, please do not hesitate to contact me.

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